First Draft and Feedback session

On the 25th February, we had to show our first draft to our class and some year 13s. Due to our filming problems, this meant our opening was not close to being finished. We had some sound issues as well as the cuts not being as quick as they could. Afterwards, our class and the year 13s gave us feedback using forms which helped us to improve our opening. Our first draft and the results of our feedback forms are below.